Olympics Underwater Sport!!!

“AHHHH”  As I dived in. Coming 1st Yay!!! I said in the water. Suddenly a shark sped up. “Nooooooooo” Jumping all of these hurdles. This is getting sooo tiring. Why did I do this Olympics!!!!! As the shark went in front of me. “Yay the shark is gone i meet” The shark went straight in front of me and came back. Suddenly ammsh (sound) the shark ate HIM!!! His cousin was at the back of him. He saw it all. His cousin Jake popped up.bursting with tears “ Noooo” he said. He said “ Why should I forced him. The water was freezing and the sun was at the end of the other side “Nooooooooo     

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  1. What a crazy Olympics! Remember that 'I' is always a capital letter.

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