Going to jump
Walking into the coolest the bestest place ever. Everyone jumping all of the place. Reading the signs, no phones or Equipment on trampoline thanks. “Come here no here no come here". So I went to the form pit. It was fun jumping but when you jump in it, it wasn't that fun!!! Jumping all over the place. We get one hour to play. The speaker went on "Everyone with the white band on sorry but you have to leave" We brought another band for another hour. Hour went passed " sorry everyone but people with green bands on you have leave. Walking out feeling the freezing cold wind blowing I stepped out. That was the bestest DAY this week!!!!!
Check your punctuation. I can help you with it.
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